Brad,
I feel like you have a good variety of sources. I think the personal interviews will be where you get some of your best information, because it you can hear about real experiences from people you know. I am interested in hearing more about the firefighters who were stuck in the basement and were rescued. I hope you tell more about their story in your paper. I also feel like the Detroit video, or a clip from the video, would be a great source to use in your class presentation.
-Crystal Windham
My reply to Crystal:
I believe you did a very good job with this assignment. I like the websites you found and may use a couple of them, either in my paper or just personally. I also am interested in the interview you did. What stuck out to me the most was the website with testimonies from people who were successful. I didn't notice anything that needs changing or adjusting.
My reply to Talacia
I believe you did a great job researching. I would be interested to see an interview with someone who has been retired for 15 or so years. That would give you a great idea as to how well they adjusted with what they saw in the field. Ask them the same questions as in your previous interview.
I feel like you have a good variety of sources. I think the personal interviews will be where you get some of your best information, because it you can hear about real experiences from people you know. I am interested in hearing more about the firefighters who were stuck in the basement and were rescued. I hope you tell more about their story in your paper. I also feel like the Detroit video, or a clip from the video, would be a great source to use in your class presentation.
-Crystal Windham
My reply to Crystal:
I believe you did a very good job with this assignment. I like the websites you found and may use a couple of them, either in my paper or just personally. I also am interested in the interview you did. What stuck out to me the most was the website with testimonies from people who were successful. I didn't notice anything that needs changing or adjusting.
My reply to Talacia
I believe you did a great job researching. I would be interested to see an interview with someone who has been retired for 15 or so years. That would give you a great idea as to how well they adjusted with what they saw in the field. Ask them the same questions as in your previous interview.